"telling me that even she "couldn't get too far"
What do you think was meant by that, "couldn't get too far"... far where? Where was she trying to get, talking about getting to?
"immortal foe was once a friend but got "corrupted" by the orb he sought too protect."
Your immortal foe, do you know who it is? What is the orb?
"I had unwittingly spent my time preparing, but the orb corrupts me."
How did/does it corrupt you, in what way are you corrupted?
"I learned about the breast, splitting the brain and the heart."
can you share anything about this learning?
"the voice of an evil god spoke through the orb and I didnt tell him it had choosen him for evil, not good."
what did the voice say? how much did you know about this evil god? how did you know it had chosen him for evil?
vs evil/whatever/whoever is messing with ya in negative way within dreaming
emerge victorious 
go beyond being human while in dreaming 
